In the world of job hunting and professional networking, sending a cold email can often feel like throwing a message into a black hole—with little hope of a response. However, when done right, a cold email can open doors you never thought possible. As a Job Search Consultant, I’ve witnessed many clients struggle with getting responses, but one particular success story stands out.
This client landed a Zoom interview with a Director of Marketing at HubSpot after sending a strategically crafted email. What made this achievement even more impressive was that the email didn’t ask for a job or a referral. Instead, it stood out because of three key elements: research, adding value, and making a small ask. Let's break down this winning formula and how you can apply it to your own cold emails.
The foundation of a great cold email is thorough research. Before reaching out, my client carefully reviewed the Director’s profile, including their professional achievements, social media posts, and recent contributions. One standout find was a recent article authored by the Director.
When crafting the email, they opened with a genuine compliment about the article, highlighting a specific insight that resonated with them. This demonstrated not only that they had done their homework but also that they valued the Director’s expertise.
Tip: When you genuinely compliment someone's work or insights, it creates an immediate connection. Avoid generic praise and focus on specific details that show you have taken the time to understand their contributions.
The second component of a successful cold email is adding value. After acknowledging the Director's work, my client mentioned HubSpot's recent launch of a new tool and offered innovative ideas to help drive adoption.
This approach did two things:
It demonstrated that the client had a deep understanding of HubSpot's current initiatives.
It positioned them as a proactive, insightful professional who could contribute meaningfully to the company.
Tip: Before sending a cold email, research the recipient’s company, recent projects, or challenges they may be facing. Offer thoughtful suggestions or insights that showcase your expertise and align with their goals.
The final element of the email was a small, actionable request. Instead of asking for a job or a referral, my client simply requested a 15-minute chat to exchange ideas and learn more about the Director’s thoughts on marketing trends.
This low-pressure approach made it easier for the Director to say yes. It also set the stage for a genuine conversation, which later led to the Zoom interview.
Tip: When making an ask, keep it concise and reasonable. Asking for a quick chat or seeking advice is often more successful than making a direct request for a job.
Ready to try this approach yourself? Here’s a simple template to get you started:
Subject Line: [Personalized Hook, e.g., "Loved Your Recent Article on Marketing Trends"]
Email Body:
Hi [Recipient’s Name],
I recently came across your [mention specific content, e.g., article, podcast, or social media post] on [topic], and I found your insights on [specific point] particularly compelling.
Given your expertise and [mention relevant company initiative if applicable], I wanted to share a few thoughts on [related topic or initiative]. [Briefly mention your ideas or observations.]
If you’re open to it, I’d love to schedule a quick 15-minute chat to exchange ideas and hear more about your perspectives on [relevant topic]. Please let me know a time that works for you.
Thank you for your time and insights.
Best, [Your Name] [Your Contact Information]
Cold emailing doesn’t have to be intimidating. By doing your research, adding value, and making a small ask, you significantly increase your chances of getting a response—even from top executives.
The next time you want to reach out to someone, remember:
Research and compliment something genuine.
Learn about their company/initiatives/goals and add value.
Ask for a small next step, like a 15-minute chat.
Give this formula a try and watch your networking efforts soar. Happy emailing!